What the examiner is looking for
Before you write anything, understand what is being marked. Table reports are assessed on four criteria, each worth 25% of your Task 1 score. Most students lose marks on the first two — not because of bad English, but because they try to describe every single number instead of selecting the important ones.
The three rules that separate Band 6 from Band 8
Rule 1: You must write an overview. The overview is a short paragraph — two or three sentences — that captures the main patterns without any specific numbers. No figures, no data points. Just the big picture. Missing the overview drops your Task Achievement score immediately. It is the single most important paragraph in your report.
Rule 2: Select data — do not describe every cell. A table with six rows and three columns has eighteen data points. You cannot describe all of them in 150–190 words. The examiner wants to see that you can identify which numbers matter and which can be left out. That is the skill being tested. Listing every cell is the fastest way to score Band 5.
Rule 3: Group the data — do not go row by row. The worst structure for a table report is: "In Japan... In Germany... In South Korea... In Brazil..." That is a list, not an analysis. Find a pattern — countries that changed a lot versus countries that changed a little — and organise your body paragraphs around those groups.
Tables are the type my students struggle with most. With a line graph, the shape tells you what to write. With a table, you have to create your own structure from raw numbers. The good news is that the skill is simple: find two groups in the data and write one paragraph about each. Once you see the groups, the report writes itself.
Now let us write one — step by step
Below is a real IELTS-style table. We are going to write a complete Band 8 report on it, one paragraph at a time. At each step, you will see exactly which part of the table we are looking at and why we are making the choices we make.
Do not start writing yet. With a line graph, the shape tells you everything. With a table, you have to find the story yourself. Scan the numbers and ask: who changed the most? Who changed the least? Are there groups?
The story: All six countries aged, but at very different speeds. Japan, Germany, and South Korea experienced rapid demographic shifts. Brazil, Egypt, and Iran changed only gradually. Japan stands out dramatically — its elderly population nearly tripled. That contrast is the entire structure of your report.
The introduction paraphrases the task prompt. You are not adding analysis here — just showing the examiner that you understood what the table is about. Change the wording enough to demonstrate real comprehension, not just synonym swapping.
The table compares the proportion of people aged 65 and above in six nations — Japan, Germany, South Korea, Brazil, Egypt, and Iran — across three time points: 1980, 2000, and 2020.
Notice: "shows" became "compares", "percentage" became "proportion", "countries" became "nations", and the six countries are named explicitly. Same information, genuine paraphrasing.
The overview captures the big picture. This is the most important paragraph in your entire report. Two or three sentences. No specific figures. Just the shape of what happened.
Overall, all six countries saw an increase in their elderly populations over the forty-year period, but the rate of aging varied significantly. Japan experienced by far the most dramatic shift, while countries such as Egypt and Iran showed only modest changes in comparison.
No numbers. No years. Just the big picture — everyone aged, but at very different rates, and Japan stands out. That is exactly what the examiner is looking for.
We identified two groups earlier. Start with the countries that aged rapidly — Japan, Germany, and South Korea. This paragraph needs specific figures, comparisons, and trend descriptions.
Japan experienced the most dramatic demographic shift, with its elderly population nearly tripling from 9.1% in 1980 to 28.7% by 2020 — far outpacing any other country in the table. South Korea followed a similar pattern of rapid aging, rising from just 3.8% to 15.8% over the same period, a more than fourfold increase. Germany, which already had the highest proportion of older residents in 1980 at 15.5%, saw a more moderate rise to 21.7%, though it remained the second-highest by the final year.
Three countries. Each one described in relation to the others — Japan as the standout, South Korea as the fastest proportional change, Germany as the one that started high. The paragraph does not go row by row. It tells a story about rapid aging.
Now the opposite group. Brazil, Egypt, and Iran all aged — but slowly and modestly compared to the first group. That contrast is what makes this paragraph work.
In contrast, the remaining three countries showed considerably slower rates of population aging. Brazil more than doubled its elderly share from 4.0% to 9.6%, making it the fastest-growing in this group. Egypt and Iran, which started at broadly comparable levels of around 3.5%, both remained below 7% by 2020, with increases of only 1.7 and 3.4 percentage points respectively over the entire period.
"In contrast" links this paragraph to the previous one — that is cohesion. Brazil is identified as the standout within this slower group. Egypt and Iran are grouped together because their data is similar. Not every number is mentioned — just the ones that matter.
The difference this makes
Here is the same Japan data described two different ways. Same table, same numbers. One reads like a spreadsheet. The other reads like an analysis.
"In Japan the percentage was 9.1% in 1980. In 2000 it was 17.4%. In 2020 it was 28.7%. In Germany the percentage was 15.5% in 1980. In 2000 it was 16.4%. In 2020..."
"Japan experienced the most dramatic demographic shift, with its elderly population nearly tripling from 9.1% to 28.7% over the four decades — far outpacing any other country in the table."
The complete report — all together
Here is the full report we just built, assembled into a single piece. Four paragraphs. Around 185 words. Clear, organised, accurate. This is what a Band 8 table report looks like.
The table compares the proportion of people aged 65 and above in six nations — Japan, Germany, South Korea, Brazil, Egypt, and Iran — across three time points: 1980, 2000, and 2020.
Overall, all six countries saw an increase in their elderly populations over the forty-year period, but the rate of aging varied significantly. Japan experienced by far the most dramatic shift, while countries such as Egypt and Iran showed only modest changes in comparison.
Japan experienced the most dramatic demographic shift, with its elderly population nearly tripling from 9.1% in 1980 to 28.7% by 2020 — far outpacing any other country in the table. South Korea followed a similar pattern of rapid aging, rising from just 3.8% to 15.8% over the same period, a more than fourfold increase. Germany, which already had the highest proportion of older residents in 1980 at 15.5%, saw a more moderate rise to 21.7%, though it remained the second-highest by the final year.
In contrast, the remaining three countries showed considerably slower rates of population aging. Brazil more than doubled its elderly share from 4.0% to 9.6%, making it the fastest-growing in this group. Egypt and Iran, which started at broadly comparable levels of around 3.5%, both remained below 7% by 2020, with increases of only 1.7 and 3.4 percentage points respectively over the entire period.
Read that report again. It is 185 words. Four paragraphs. The table has eighteen data points but the report only uses about ten of them. That is the skill — knowing which numbers to include and which to leave out. Selection is what separates a Band 6 table report from a Band 8.